Saturday, 1 March 2014

Phoebe 100 WC


I am stressed. I was concentrating in my room; the more I concentrated the more I got stressed. On the outside I looked so happy and joyful, (But on the inside I felt so harassed I could blow up!) Then the ground shook and I fell into a mouldy, deep hole, I fell and fell until I could not see my bedroom and I was at the centre of the earth! I was pushing through the earth… then a little man came but I didn’t see his face he flew me back into my bedroom and in was safe, I was relived!
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  1. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 22:14

    Well Phoebe, what an unexpected chain of events for your character and the reader! I enjoyed reading this as I felt I didn't know what was going to happen next. I wonder who the strange saviour was. Did you have any ideas about who he might be? It's a lovely idea.
    Well done for your excellent story.
    Mr Leatherdale (Team 100)

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    1. Anonymous5 March 2014 at 15:48

      Thank you. I thought he might be someone like a wizard like Harry Potter.
      By Phoebe

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  2. Unknown12 March 2014 at 16:44

    Wow Phoebe! this is so cool!

    By Darcie

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  3. Anonymous3 April 2014 at 19:09

    Thank you for commenting on my 100 word challenge.
    By Phoebe

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