Saturday, 8 March 2014

Alanna's 100 WC


Once Upon a time there was a beautiful girl named Tiana. When she was a little girl she had went to Charlotte’s house whilst her mum was making Charlotte a dress and reading a story. Tiana and her dad had hoped to one day open up a restraunt. But one night she had wished for that restraunt to be real, she wished upon an evening star. When she was a teenager she had 2 jobs to make money for the restraunt. There was a masquerade party that night and a frog hopped up to Tiana. But Tiana didn’t want to be a princess and walked away.
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2 comments :

  1. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 09:49

    Hi there Alanna,
    I enjoyed reading your response to the prompt. You have some interesting ideas in there. I would love you to reread your writing to see if you can improve it. Have a look at your spelling and punctuation. I think it would make a big difference!
    Keep writing and sharing,
    Mary (Team 100WC)
    Australia

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2014 at 17:10

    Hi Alanna! Its Darcie i loved your story!

    By Darcie

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