I am stressed. I was concentrating in my room; the more I
concentrated the more I got stressed. On the outside I looked so happy and
joyful, (But on the inside I felt so harassed I could blow up!) Then the ground
shook and I fell into a mouldy, deep hole, I fell and fell until I could not
see my bedroom and I was at the centre of the earth! I was pushing through the
earth… then a little man came but I didn’t see his face he flew me back into my
bedroom and in was safe, I was relived!
Well Phoebe, what an unexpected chain of events for your character and the reader! I enjoyed reading this as I felt I didn't know what was going to happen next. I wonder who the strange saviour was. Did you have any ideas about who he might be? It's a lovely idea.
ReplyDeleteWell done for your excellent story.
Mr Leatherdale (Team 100)
Thank you. I thought he might be someone like a wizard like Harry Potter.
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Wow Phoebe! this is so cool!
ReplyDeleteBy Darcie
Thank you for commenting on my 100 word challenge.
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