Saturday, 1 March 2014

Darcie H 100 WC


“It’s a short trip papa! I thought you said I could play with the horses…!” Shouted Ann. “Of course you can dear!” replied papa. “Now, now Charlotte stop being mean to your sister...”  Said Mother “IM NOT!” Screamed Charlotte “LETS GET THIS STRAIGHT, YOU’RE THE ONES BEING MEAN!” She ran out of the coach and fled into the forest pulling her bag across the hard ground. There were worms which were pushing through the earth. “Charlotte!” declared Papa “Get Back HERE RIGHT NOW!” he shouted after her.  There was silence. She truly had gone. Ann screamed as she saw the bear “GO!” Mother told the coach-man.

2 comments :

  1. Wow Darcie I love your writing I wonder what will happen next?
    By Phoebe

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  2. Thank you Phoebe!

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