Saturday, 8 March 2014

Hollie's 100 WC


Once upon time, ages ago three little pigs were going away. One piggy made his house out of straw however a wolf came… He bowled the whole house down… Then the piggy made a house out of wood, but then the wolf came again… And he bowled the whole house down again. Then piggy made a house out of brick and piggy 1 piggy 2 were in there to. Then the wolf came and tried to blow it down but he couldn’t. So the three pigs got revenge on the wolf. They trapped a wolf in a bag and gobbled the wolf up.
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5 comments :

  1. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 15:41

    I really like your ending Hollie

    Faye

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  2. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 15:42

    Camille

    I like how you changed the ending off the Three Little Pigs.

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  3. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 15:42

    Very well done Holly I really love the twist at the end. I cant wait to see more of your writing. Ellie, Year 5.

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  4. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 15:50

    I like the way you put gobbled the wolf up. Well don.
    catelyn y5

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  5. Anonymous3 April 2014 at 19:11

    Hollie what's going to happen next I loved your story that much that I hope there's a part 2.
    By Phoebe.

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