One lovely, bright spring day Amelia Sharples went to her
grandmother’s beautiful house in Wales for a splendid picnic by the beach.
Amelia was really hungry since she didn’t have any breakfast at all that
morning, so she went over to the brightly coloured kitty cat cookie jar. But
when she lifted the lid there were no cookies. All Amelia saw were just some
Haribo sweet wrappers. But at least the picnic was only 15 minutes away. When
it was the picnic Amelia stuffed her face all day until she was full up. “That
was really the best picnic yet!” said Amelia with a little smile.
Hi Alanna - thanks for your story. I enjoyed the storyline as Amelia was full of expectation and excitement about the picnic. You included some very good description and I enjoyed the twists in your story.
ReplyDeleteKeep up your writing
John C
Melbourne, Australia