Sonny was on
holiday with his family. They went to the beach and Sonny decided to go for a
walk. He was paddling in the sea when he found a bottle-containing note inside,
like the ones in movies, and it was a treasure map. Sonny got really excited
and ran back to his mum. She said he could go and look for the treasure. He walked to the coconut tree and the map
said go 10 steps to the left and it then said walk forward. His mouth opened with shock as he saw a
massive mouth of a cave. He went inside it…
How exciting finding a treasure map in a bottle. Lots of lovely descriptions in your story. I could not see ..but when she lifted the lid...in your story I wonder where would have been a good place to put it? Thank you for your 100wc entry Owen.
ReplyDeleteby leo wow owen i wonder what what was in the cave very good you helped me
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