One night Amelia-Rose lifted the lid. But when she
lifted the lid it was a bit unusual. Amelia fell down the hole in the lid. She saw
rabbits singing, birds dancing and frogs flying. She watched all of the animals
having a tea party Amelia asked “Can I join in?” The animals did not rely they
carried on singing, dancing and flying. Amelia tried to work out where she was.
Was it a made up places or is it somewhere she had been? She ran and found
where she fell. Amelia then rose again but this time in bed. Was it a made-up?
Was it a dream?
A very curious story Ellie, I wonder if it was a dream?
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this, I liked your description of what the animals were doing, especially the alliteration in 'frogs flying'. I also liked your use of rhetorical questions. Well done!
Miss Brogan (TEAM 100WC)
Wow Ellie I love all of your rhetorical questions in there I wonder if it was a dream and love the sound of making animals alive, like rabbits singing and frogs flying.
ReplyDeleteBy Phoebe.